Sitesauce is a static site generator for dynamically-generated websites made by Miguel Piedrafita.
He’s addressing tech-savvy people (teams) who are running commercial websites using WordPress or other content management systems in the backend.
Miguel did a very good job of writing the copy and designing the site.
The copy is close to perfectly written for the target market and the design is consistent, clear, and was overall a pleasure.
The structure of his page
4th part: More persuasion
What could be improved?
Not much, honestly.
It’s clear what the service is called, what it does, how it benefits the target customer, and why they should buy it.
The call-to-action „Start your 7-day trial” could be replaced with:
Convert to a fast, static site!
And the video could be placed between the headline and the summary of what it does.
He could also be more personal when he says „Jump into a call with the creator of Sitesauce to get you started. Schedule now” and make it:
Jump into a call with Miguel, the creator of Sitesauce, to get you started.
Talk with Miguel / Call Miguel now
And Miguel should decide whether he goes for „I” or „We”. At the moment, he’s using „We” quite a lot although it’s only him. That’s a disconnect.
But if there are more people involved, say so and speak of Sitesauce as a team effort.
Also, consider adding a photo of you (and your team).
Takeaways from Sitesauce
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